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Character: Black-Mumba (progress)
#1
Guys itz forest guardian but he sucks so plz feed back to update.

His hair,mask,pants
sucks


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(05-19-2015, 05:53 AM)Shino saga Wrote:  Guys itz forest guardian but he sucks so plz feed back to update.

His hair,mask,pants
sucks

I like the concept but he doesn't really look like a forest guardian to me. Make the blue more green, and he would. I like how the 3 pieces of cloth covering his pants look like leaves ;)

The one thing I'd really change is the hair shading. Remember that the light is coming from the top-right corner. The current hair shading looks like the like is coming from the front. This also applies for the clothes' shading. While the face and his pants are shaded correctly (=light coming from the top-right corner), the shirt, scarf and the 'three leaves' need some adjustments.

If you don't see what I mean, I can make you a quick edit. Just let me know.
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(05-19-2015, 02:53 PM)Memento Wrote:  
(05-19-2015, 05:53 AM)Shino saga Wrote:  Guys itz forest guardian but he sucks so plz feed back to update.

His hair,mask,pants
sucks

I like the concept but he doesn't really look like a forest guardian to me. Make the blue more green, and he would. I like how the 3 pieces of cloth covering his pants look like leaves ;)

The one thing I'd really change is the hair shading. Remember that the light is coming from the top-right corner. The current hair shading looks like the like is coming from the front. This also applies for the clothes' shading. While the face and his pants are shaded correctly (=light coming from the top-right corner), the shirt, scarf and the 'three leaves' need some adjustments.

If you don't see what I mean, I can make you a quick edit. Just let me know.
OK I'll try to fix it but I use paint tool sai so it's hard for me.
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[Image: 2q9z1on_th.jpg] is this OK right leg not fix yet.
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The previous blue Pic was Great.
U have to fix the left Leg.
Contract me on FB about it.
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(06-16-2015, 09:08 PM)DARK-EVIL Wrote:  The previous blue Pic was Great.
U have to fix the left Leg.
Contract me on FB about it.

No thanks to u cuz I hv already fixed his legs n i hv created is standing and walking sprites only and I guess I can't created him any more
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Hey shino If this char is not in our mode Then I will Take it to the LFNHExtended Mode.As A iceman named Frost.

Also I did some edits in the Pic.Now it look like an Evil.
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(06-17-2015, 06:55 PM)DARK-EVIL Wrote:  [Image: YHLumPd.png]

Hey shino If this char is not in our mode Then I will Take it to the LFNHExtended Mode.As A iceman named Frost.

Also I did some edits in the Pic.Now it look like an Evil.

Ok bro do what ever u like
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?? What ever Are you ready to make them or not?
Our mod remember.
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