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First face sprite =P
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This is my first sprite lol...i would say its a preety lame photoshop job compare to the others...
I would gladly like to hear about your commets and suggestions.
BTW..RoxasXIII made me this Avatar all the credits for him (his my cousin =P)



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Its all right.A bix pixilated. Nice colours. the main thing is too many loose pixels.

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Thnks for helping:D ill try to make a better next time ;).
BTW, how did you make this little clip with Davis Henry and Julian?
In what program are you using?


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[xx-small]Just a little suggestion... why do you not set this "Nimos The 15th" as your siggy. Then you don't even have to type it in every post...[/size]


Like already said, your face pic could need some improvement relating to odd-pixels. The lines aren't solid, they break up where they shouldn't. Also, pay attention to the hair, especially the hair tips. Some have a different color...
All in all I can just say, keep practicing, and you'll become a good designer ;)
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Thnks :) i'll try to do better next time:D.
And i dont really know what siggy is lol..(im new in this forums)
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Siggy, or signature, is that thing below each post you do. For example, my siggy is below this little black line - the o_O-Hater-bar as well as the LFE-image. You can easily set your own siggy by clicking here. This is the same link as if you would click on User CP and then on edit signature.
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I thought we are talking about a face-sprite?

Anyway that sprite looks pretty good (for beginners). I remember my first face sprite was done on paint and it had no shading :d
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(08-12-2008, 11:36 AM)Nimos Wrote:  BTW, how did you make this little clip with Davis Henry and Julian?
In what program are you using?

I use Adobe image ready and paint. this was the 2nd gif I EVER made. Took me a while thou. Anyway good luck with making more face sprites.

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10 startpoints-
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-The colors are pretty unclear done, and that is what facemaking is about, about clearnes! (-3)
-Ok, the colors are ok, (+2)
-but the hair color dont fits! (-1)
-The Background is the same! (-1)
-No effects! (-1)
-No layers/masks (-1)
-No swiches/turns/copypastas/blurs (-1)
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result: 4 points
(4/20)
Ok, you are newbie, and you are learnig, so dont mind me my hard rating!
Learn outa your mistakes!^^
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