01-29-2012, 07:15 PM
Contrast on outfit is not strong enough, you probably need to darken the dark side
now on the the other hand the hair has too much contrast, dark stuff should be on her left side of her hair so it can look some-what round...if u leave it so it just looks flat compared to the rest
shading on her right leg is misplaced, flip it horizontally to match it up with the invisible lf2 lighting
not much else, practice working on proportions on body and faces, you can even try taking a sprite (match it up with the size ur working with), analyze, and practice copying it
~hope tht roughly helps out
now on the the other hand the hair has too much contrast, dark stuff should be on her left side of her hair so it can look some-what round...if u leave it so it just looks flat compared to the rest
shading on her right leg is misplaced, flip it horizontally to match it up with the invisible lf2 lighting
not much else, practice working on proportions on body and faces, you can even try taking a sprite (match it up with the size ur working with), analyze, and practice copying it
~hope tht roughly helps out
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