[Sprite] Zeck (uptaded)

[XLittlebob252]

This is my newst character and my second i saw so some tips from Aletric.

Version 1:

(fixed*)

Version 2:

almost every comment will help

and i want to say thanks to Alerctric

[skelguardian]

cool, i like it !
exept.. his hair looks like some kind of alien bug on his head (?)
but the rest is nice!

[XLittlebob252]

thanks and ill fix it right away

[Alblaka]

It still looks like a alien bug XD

I think, it's way to much in the front and way to less at the back of his head... and it's maybe not enough shaded. Not sure, i suck at drawing hair (i suck at drawing generally)...
BUT i can say, it looks strange ^^

[XLittlebob252]

its my first drawing a hair...

and its shaded very well

[Alectric]

may i ask, what i helped you with?
i like receiving credit, but what for is i want to know. oh was it my "how to become a jolly good sprite"?
you have done a pretty good job! nothing too much to complain about
and, well, since you seem to be so keen, i thought i would help ya out a bit
and just fix a few things up:

what i fixed:
-added brighter bits and darker bits to his hair
- fixed his arms into a more comfortable position
- fixed his pants a little, made it more like he was bending his knee
hope i helped again

[Ascor]

hairs should be a little bit lower they look like knifes
i like the char and i see much potential in him

[XLittlebob252]

thank you very much and ill try to make it lower.