Contest #1: Sprite Challenge

[Nathan]

Lol, no wonder my brpther likes ur work, Yours is soooo cool
MAKE IT INTO A REAL CHARACTER!!! :3
pplz?

[snorsorbet]

Thanks to Tim for much feedback!

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[Bamboori]

yay, my first real sprite:

cause that isnt a standing (obviously), i made this out of it:


the second one for the challenge please

[Chishio]

The head was done really well, but the body does not seem like it is in line with the rest of the body. Also the right side of the cape needs to be fixed so it is on level with the rest of the cape.

[Bamboori]

ok the cape is fixed now. but what do you mean with "the body does not seem like it is in line with the rest of the body" ?

what about this?

[KaywonnJuto]

nice work...
though i was a little confused about the yellow part of his hair...
It would look better if everything lookef the same for the hair
like all pur[le or blond, idk (opinion)...I'm just saying

[Chishio]

I mean the right shoulder seems to extend to far from the head.

I worked on the shading on mine, what do you think of it?

[Bamboori]

to be honest i dont see any difference :P

update (shoulder):

better now?

edit: @below: thx^^ and now i see :P yeah it looks much better now ^^d

[Chishio]

A lot better, good job.

Also as for the differences, I just worked on the shading a bit. You can see the areas changed here:

[Bamboori]

btw:
@LF2TimmE1:

Standard size (like 79x79 or 99x99; no uber big or uber small sprites)

erm, is that the size of you char? im not sure if bp just forgot about that