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Chillyheart
#1
I was inspired by Azriel's representative char to make a representative char, who looks like the real me, so here it is:
(however, i call this one Chillyheart, because SirFrog is a strange humanoid)
[Image: metx4.png]
Ordinary one...A common "me" XD

[Image: mewflailfn7.png]
Me with my weapon of choice: a morning star!
(my weapon of choice is in fact a sword, but swords are so common :P)

Just so you know, he's based on Dennis, and i used his face and his hands...

Comments and critics please!
(and mind that this is my first real attempt to make a LF2-styled char)
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#2
It is good, but I can see that you have used Dennis as base for everything :P
The weapon is not that nic, it is too large. I prefer the common "me".

If it is your first attempt of all time to create a LF2 styled character, GJ!!!!11!

TITLE: a idea
make cave for bear?
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#3
I like it...
You might wanna darken the hair-a-bit...I'm just saying...
I don't know about the weapon, I like it though...
If you want the weapon you should proboally put it behind his back...
and let him use it while he's attacking...(It's just my idea)
By the way does that really look like you?
Thats nice by the way
change the clothes-a-bit too...it looks too simple (just the clothing...)
My tip-
I would preffer seeing saggy pants with a chain hanging from the pants
i'd just like to see chillyheart wear one, thats all :L
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#4
+ nice shading, it's looking great!
+ good color choices, they work pretty well together

- on the borders (esp. pants) some pixels from Dennis are sticking out
- the left arm (our perspective: right one) is strangely looking. Kinda too much in front, should be more behind the char.
- shoes look a little unrealistic.
- some details (face, hands, as you mentioned, and hair-shading) are too close to Dennis.

My opinion, if you fix some points, I'll be happy but I'll also be happy if you can finish the char ;)
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#5
Alright, new update:
[Image: mewb6.png]
[Image: mewflailve2.png]
Things changed:
  • Reshaded hair, hands and improved clothes
  • Added some details on the jacket
  • Shaded the flail itself (Funny nobody ever noticed XD)
  • Made taller, since i'm quite tall irl (15 years, 188 cm)
  • Repainted shoes
  • Made a slight change in hair color

| Metaknight | G-types | Bottle Skinz | Companion Cube | Art Gallery |
"Do not grieve, it is logical. The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few, or the one."
- Mr. Spock
"A man's not dead while his name is still spoken"
- Terry Pratchett, Going Postal
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I am also about 190cm with 15 years^^

to the char:
he looks a bit too thin, otherwise its quite cool^^
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#7
looks fine to me... do you know what you get for this?
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yes, the official Blue Phoenix sign of approval :D
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