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RazenBrenday's Sprites
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Nice! Welcome to the forums.

I like it, but a little cc

Legs look kinda bulky and too straight. Hands are kinda long compared to lf standards. Face is awesome!



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#3
Wow. It looks really cool. Good job.
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Good to see you've gotten the registration issue fixed ^^

Love the facepic, its great!

The sprite, some feedback based on comparison with original LF2 characters:
1) Head seems a little bit big, maybe 1-2 pixels. Might just be the issue with the torso.
2) Torso seems to be too angled towards facing the viewer directly, might be because the jacket looks completely straight instead of rounded.
3) Torso looks very small compared to his very long arms.
4) Legs have the same issue of angling as the torso's jacket and seems to appear too stocky or tall in the crotch area. Again it might only have been an issue becaues of the torso.

Other than that looks like a cool character!
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wow beautiful work,that anime face looks so legit.i want to see some more of it.
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Can u answer my pm!!
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Oh wowee, this totally flew under my radar! Just for future reference, it does help to bump the thread yourself sometimes with new images so it's easier to notice updates Wobble

Face pics look pro, not much to critique about (apart from not being particularly fond of the "eyes on top of hair" thing but I guess this is a stylistic choice) since you got everything nailed down almost perfectly. Personal fav is Jessie, though, really like both the design and proportions (only thing slightly bothering me is the ear color giving off a metallic look). Also, Zonar's hair looks amazing.

Some minor issue for me is the beard of Crave, it seems just placed on top of the face; the shading does not quite follow the rest of the face. Also, the hair of Jin-Punk-Baek is not quite matching to the sprite; give it a bit more slope towards the back so it doesn't look like horns sticking out of his skull ;)

Just nitpicking at this point, though. By the way, fancy header image :woah::thumbsup:

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Wow You are Good. I had like to ask you help us out a little with the LFS project but we are pretty fine with CrazyBunny and Tommy and it appears belows your level :O. hopes to see you creating charachters, I can help data changing them if you need help in that field. Count me impressed.
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(11-10-2018, 05:33 PM)Silverthorn Wrote:  Oh wowee, this totally flew under my radar! Just for future reference, it does help to bump the thread yourself sometimes with new images so it's easier to notice updates Wobble

Face pics look pro, not much to critique about (apart from not being particularly fond of the "eyes on top of hair" thing but I guess this is a stylistic choice) since you got everything nailed down almost perfectly. Personal fav is Jessie, though, really like both the design and proportions (only thing slightly bothering me is the ear color giving off a metallic look). Also, Zonar's hair looks amazing.

Some minor issue for me is the beard of Crave, it seems just placed on top of the face; the shading does not quite follow the rest of the face. Also, the hair of Jin-Punk-Baek is not quite matching to the sprite; give it a bit more slope towards the back so it doesn't look like horns sticking out of his skull ;)

Just nitpicking at this point, though. By the way, fancy header image :woah::thumbsup:

Thank you for a great suggestion and i will modified it, glad that the greatest artist also administrator are recommend and guide on my thread. :D

(11-10-2018, 08:19 PM)Uri Wrote:  Wow You are Good. I had like to ask you help us out a little with the LFS project but we are pretty fine with CrazyBunny and Tommy and it appears belows your level :O. hopes to see you creating charachters, I can help data changing them if you need help in that field. Count me impressed.

Thanks! and sure i already figured it out
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