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SOS - Happy Clown - 03-04-2017

Can someone please help me in making her shooting sprite I mean her bow it just look creepy

[Image: ka07ye.jpg]
[Image: 2w1s7ye.jpg]

RE: SOS - STM1993 - 03-04-2017

The main issue is that her face never changes when she is shooting the bow. Make her head face right instead of facing 45deg.

RE: SOS - Gad - 03-04-2017

what stmsaid + the bow looks very small

i think this way it would look much better
[Image: YdlnD03.png]
if you still wanna fix the angle, just dont overdo it

RE: SOS - Happy Clown - 03-04-2017

(03-04-2017, 10:28 AM)STM1993 Wrote:  The main issue is that her face never changes when she is shooting the bow. Make her head face right instead of facing 45deg.

Like this?? [Image: fooeg0.jpg]

RE: SOS - Cabba - 03-04-2017

just want to point out, she is missing her nose on the last two

RE: SOS - Happy Clown - 03-04-2017

(03-04-2017, 12:21 PM)Gad Wrote:  what stmsaid + the bow looks very small

i think this way it would look much better
[Image: YdlnD03.png]
if you still wanna fix the angle, just dont overdo it

Ya it will, but that pose of Archer is very common at the same time her style of shooting is very different. This is just her first shot second shot she will bend a little bit
(03-04-2017, 12:41 PM)Cabba Wrote:  just want to point out, she is missing her nose on the last two
It is because I just did a quick edit

RE: SOS - Gad - 03-04-2017

I'm just telling, that bow is significantly too small on these sprites.
Also, if you plan on making a full-char you should work with the shading. It's very dull at the moment.

just my quick show on the shading improvement:

[Image: DvhVTZ6.png]
what i did:
- increased color contrast on skin and yellow clothing
- fixed shading on clothing ( your mainly just has an thick outline, while it misses shadows on the left)

RE: SOS - Happy Clown - 03-04-2017

I thought it will get fixed automatically when I'll resize it XD

RE: SOS - Gad - 03-04-2017

Well at the moment it looks kinda flat after resizing. Have in mind that resizing also causes details to fade out which doesn't help. Keep it up.

And is this some full project?

RE: SOS - Happy Clown - 03-04-2017

(03-04-2017, 01:54 PM)Gad Wrote:  Well at the moment it looks kinda flat after resizing. Have in mind that resizing also causes details to fade out which doesn't help. Keep it up.

And is this some full project?

Yup!! It's for my mode