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Mine's Sprites
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Work Dated From 12/7/2011.
water god:
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Ryu(fail):

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magician
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wizard
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Deep+Henry= Denry
[Image: FeMUml.png] 13th zone[THE RETURN] spriting contest.

zombie
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voyager
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Soul_warrior:

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Scranin

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Mage

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Daniel


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Sonny:

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Sherlock Holmes



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The Great Danton.


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Soldiearisho

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Karatasho

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Devilsho

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Warrior


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pop



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Fire goddess



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Warriomo-womo
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Carton



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Police




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Eyeless



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Rock guy



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Alen



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Niskesn



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God




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Warriomo



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Aurath



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Warshio



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Revamps
woody
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davis
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freeze
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firzen
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My style
Woody
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Davis
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Firen
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Old Works (upto 11/7/2011) (Click to View)
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#2
Well - constructive criticism.
Good points:
It looks relatively Human

Workable on:
He's a bit skinny? As you've already pointed out.
The feet shouldn't look like ovals pointing opposite directions - he looks relatively like his feet poke sideways. (broken ankle style)
Shading seems odd to me in places. Some bits i understand other's I dont. There doesn't seem to be any point where light hits the hair, it's just a lot of light.

Nice try... hope to see more in future when you progress :D
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#3
The good thing is the hair is awesome! Just clean some dirty pixels near the hair.
You should make the hand a little bit more thicker.
His legs are very cartoon-ish style. Try to redraw it.

Good drawing... Hope you can sprite better.
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#4
Thx guys Now i try to ommit my mistakes
@Eddie:Would it be better for the legs if i make it a lil' bit Rectangular??

I have an editted version there pls see it
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#5
The edit looks much better now.
Well done Firzenx - seems rectangular looks slightly better huh? :P
Hair I noticed now has a source of light shining on it - Brilliant :D
It also seems darker all round, much better.

Still got room for improvement - thickening of arms etc. But other than that, well done FirzenX :D
Keep up the good work
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#6
[Image: 256yddl.jpg]

This is an editted Punch.
hey guys srry for DoublePost :(

Here i made one char using Eddie's Base technique(mine looks crappy don't think its his Fault)
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I made it a bit like Vegitto(goku and Vegetta) I think its far different anyways i changed the colours of the shirts and inner jacket :)
Credits:
Eddie
FirzenX

Edit: Lets name Him as Xvegitto :0 hehehhehe

Here is another attempt:
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#7
The problem ingame is this [Image: untitled1xhh3.jpg] i think you know only black pixels (#000000) are transparent ingame.

Try not to use too much blur on the images.

Damn you are right Simoneon.

I know ;DDD - Simoneon
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By the way Simoneon is right i never used blur that is a kind of brush.If u download and save as BMP i think the problem is fixed :).
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firzenx Wrote:By the way Simoneon is right i never used blur that is a kind of brush.If u download and save as BMP i think the problem is fixed .
^actually that makes the problem even worse
the way to solve it is for you to save it as a bmp, and upload it to a image host that wont convert it into a jpeg.
like imageshack for instance.
imageshack converts it to a png, but you can stil open that up in paint and copy and paste onto the old one
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#10
Hmm Alec wat abt my sprite
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