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Trying out some display picture for stores (contest entry)
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Vectors mania.. You could see they could be related to some subjects..

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In general they are technically ok. Nice to see you've imroved. I still see some flaws tho.
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Top layers kinda fade in to the bottom ones, could be adjusted to be more readable.

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Could be better positioned/centered, needs some more free space on right side.

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Some parts are too sharp imo. I understand this might be a concept. If not i would rather use more rounded curves, than straight lines.

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Doesn't blend well. You could have separeted the brain from gears with some outline or smthn.

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Curves on letters are messy. I feel like you didn't work enough with them. They could feel more roundy. Font is very inconsistent, could be more balanced (things like different width at some arms etc). I'm not that experienced with fonts so it's hard to describe.

I also feel like there's not enough margin between letters and squares strokes, and centering could be fixed.

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Same as with letters up there. Letter is messy, as well as the shine on the glass.

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The 'length' lines are inconsistent. Some of them touch the gear, some of them not. The distance should be the same everywhere.



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Thanks a lot Gad for this constructive feedback. Those are the designs I did last year around aug-nov.

Right now I'm still working on vectors as an intern and would see myself as an UI/UX designer in the future . Basically these vectors are used as covers for blogs and these convey some meaning. So take a look at these. I will label them.

As you have pointed out I started working on placements and adding more details. These works are preferrably flat because I can crank a lot of them on per day basis so that they can use it in their blogs.

Comments and criticism are always welcome


Healthcare
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Robotics(tryout)
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Electrical engineering
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Photo manipulation. Had to club two pictures ( one with legs and one with heels) and create a themed content that encourages girls to involve themselves in sports.

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This looks more like traced photo than photomanipulation. Only trainer shoes look realistic.
Also shading on legs looks kinda wrong.



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Marketing collateral. Something in the lines of previous image

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One more collateral
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