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My Wikia Chosen Beta, feedback and collaboration is welcome
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This is my writing i'm planning to be a mangaka

http://chosenbeta.wikia.com/wiki/Chosen-beta_Wiki

Any feedback is welcome collaboration is welcome too
Just need help with arcs and ideas

My character Andou Oeiji idk if his lame or not this is what I can come up with I want to make him better.

Still working on my drawings I want to be my own manga artist
I'll try to figure out how wikia works.


Trying to relate it with these characters would like this story to be like a certain magical index, yu yu hakusho, hunter x hunter, fate / stay night unlimited blade works, saint seiya, gantz, beelzebub, bleach, the law of ueki, magi, UQ Holder, One piece, Jet Set Radio Future,Trails of Cold steel, tokyo underground and zatch bell.

Idk what I come up with is lame or not!!
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Yo, what are you actually going for? "Designing" a character and building a story around him seems like a risky move; doing it the other way round is a tad easier.

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(10-02-2017, 03:19 PM)Oeiji Wrote:  Just need help with arcs and ideas
So you're telling me that you have no storyline whatsoever? In LF2-terms, this would be equivalent to "Hey I have a name for a char, anybody has an idea how he could look like and what moves he could have?".


(10-02-2017, 03:19 PM)Oeiji Wrote:  Trying to relate it with these characters would like this story to be like a certain magical index, yu yu hakusho, hunter x hunter, fate / stay night unlimited blade works, saint seiya, gantz, beelzebub, bleach, the law of ueki, magi, tokyo underground and zatch bell.



Sorry but I honestly don't see where this is going...

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My more precise opinion is try not to make it a Mary Sue or Gary Sue.

A more general one, is I don't understand what you are trying to convey with these characters when you are going to develop stories after fleshing out them. But it is a completely valid way, just unusual because you have to shape (back)story after designing them, not the other way around.
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I'm trying to shape the backstory I'll have to construct more and yeah I'm trying to know how to convey the characters.
I'm constructing my wikia like the other anime character wikia's


For example:

http://beelzebub.wikia.com/wiki/Tatsumi_Oga

http://toarumajutsunoindex.wikia.com/wik..._no_Index)

http://uq-holder.wikia.com/wiki/Touta_Konoe

http://tokyoghoul.wikia.com/wiki/Ken_Kaneki

http://gantz.wikia.com/wiki/Kei_Kurono

I sometimes feel like my story doesn't make sense but I had some readers who enjoyed it and understand it.
So i'm gonna keep continuing my writing and drawing for this kind of stuff.

yeah thats what I meant: In LF2-terms, this would be equivalent to "Hey I have a name for a char, anybody has an idea how he could look like and what moves he could have?".

I got the name of the character I know what he would look like and figuring out the special moves..

I sort of got a story line for character but yeah we will see: So you're telling me that you have no storyline whatsoever?

I don't see where it is going either but i'll see!! I have stories and designs up in my head!!
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